Elusive

Mademoiselle Caroline had wide, black eyes as vast as a wormhole; none knew what exactly would happen, if one sank inside those incredible depths. One could question whether they ever stood still or if they were vortexes sprinting in circles. Her elusive hands held only the banister, her mind would not betray her heart. She always slept alone.

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8 comments so far

  1. lissa on

    oddly intriguing character, this mademoiselle caroline, perhaps she is just shy…

  2. Maggie on

    Reads like a very illusive person and most likely by choice.

  3. Loch Rob on

    So, dive into the eyes, hold on, and see what happens. Interesting read.

  4. Tumblewords on

    Interesting character. You’ve shown her well.

  5. Jukota on

    I like how you alluded to the hands as elusive. What was she hiding? Very nice!

  6. shraddha on

    she seems fun..i want to know her..

  7. Leo on

    interesting character, this madam caroline! 🙂

  8. Tammie on

    wide, black eyes as vast as a wormhole: enticing…..


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