One false step and shoes drip, muddy; blind, except to the woman beside, he takes a slip into a puddle. The bold splash bounces like blue rain with a tint of dirt. Competing thoughts trouble his decision-making skills. He lays down and lets the woman walk over top. Her heels leave two light marks on his stomach.


5 comments so far

  1. Fledgling Poet on

    Oh wow, this was very visual…lol. You led me in an unexpected direction!

  2. floreta on

    wow. what a scene.

  3. Geraldine on

    Great take on this prompt. Great ending…

  4. Heart of a Ready Writer on

    Bold indeed.

  5. gabrielle on

    Chivalry at its best.

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