Sleeping on train tracks

We hopped the train without tickets and stumbled into an empty cart. We weren’t sure what independence would be like, but visions of sunshine guided us north. Hell wouldn’t contain us any longer. The conductor came round and saw us sleeping but didn’t say a word. Footsteps woke me up and brought me eye to eye with faith.


5 comments so far

  1. Lilibeth on

    Two things I like: it sounds hopeful, like the rest of the story is going to be encouraging, and it made me want to read more.

  2. AD on

    huh!!! where is the continuation 😦

    Happy SS

    Click Here For My Scribbling

  3. floreta on

    i like how there is two references to vision here.

  4. Dee on

    Visions of escape! Well written 🙂

    Carry On Tuesday #5 and SS #168

  5. quinbrowne on

    “…eye to eye with faith”

    i do love a good line!

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